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Lamentations Of The Broken(ZP Mission 10 Pt.1)

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Published: Jun 24, 2016

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I finally finished my mission! 8D

I tried my utmost to make this story a good one, but I admit I am not used to working with a set plotline since I usually come up with my own. I hope I correctly portrayed the personalities of Carth and NightShroud. Personally, I don't think any of my stories are all that great, and I was floored when I won second place in Mission Eight. Maybe I just have low self-esteem, eh? Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy this and that I didn't screw up too badly.

~Notes~

*Word Count:5,283

*Composed using Calmly Writer Online and Microsoft WordPad

*Translation Of Theseus' Prayer

Oh Saviour, saving Victim
Who opens the gate of Heaven
Our enemies besiege us
Give us strength, bring us aid
(from the song "Sanctuary" by Alan Menken, used in the movie "The Hunchback Of Notre Dame")

*Music I Listened To When Writing

-"Hero's Journey" by BrunuhVille

-"Our Hero(Hero's Journey-Vocal Version)" by BrunuhVille

-"1 Hour Of Fantasy Music-'Rebirth'(Full Album)" by BrunuhVille

-"The Huntsman" by James Newton Howard(from the movie "The Huntsman:Winter's War")

-"The Children Arrive" by James Newton Howard(from the movie "The Huntsman:Winter's War")

~Characters Used By The Author~

Theseus Menelaus Athens

~Cameos~

Carth Dieter

NightShroud

General Eonami Vrykal

Leader Lavinia Maruku

~Credits~

Carth Dieter,preview image ©

NightShroud ©

General Eonami Vrykal ©

Leader Lavinia Maruku, ©

Theseus Menelaus Athens,Aegeus,Malachius Styx Madea ©

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CyanoDrake

Aug 16, 2016

Just now I read this (shame on me) and I really like your entry so far, your writing sounds so professional! The fighting progressed really smoothly with some interesting dialogue and I really like the way you incorporated Theseus's spirituality into the story, it feels refreshing to see this kind of thing portrayed in a natural and positive light. I need to read more of your stuff.